Tuesday, June 5, 2007

My Strange Experience

I'm Sophie, and I have a misfortune because I'm the oldest of three sisters. It means that I have no future. After my father died, I started to work at my mother's hat shop as an apprentice. My sister, Lettie works at pastry shop. The youngest sister, Martha becomes an assistant of witch. Suddenly, a tall black castle appeard. Everyone had thought this castle had belonged to Witch of the Waste, but they found it belonged to Wizard Howl. I thought I wanted to see Lettie, so I went to the pastry shop. Then a surprising thing happened. Lettie actually switched with Martha. I was so amazed.
Lettie and Martha changed off because Lettie wanted to learn about witch craft and Martha didn't. I made a request that my mother ignored. That was to give me wages. I felt discontent. In my shop next morning, the grantest customer entered. I talked with her and found she was the Witch of Waste. After she left, I became a decrepit woman, but I thought about my situation, quite calmly. I hobbled over to my shop door and walked. I walked and walked and saw a magnificient view of the way I had come. Wizard Howl's castle was roving.
I entered the castle, and met a person. The person was Howl's apprentice,Michael. On the fireplace, I was surprised at the crackling of the fire. I said, "If the spell was off, I would have my heart eaten before I could turn around." "Don't you want your heart eaten?" asked the fire. "Naturally, I don't" I answered. The fire was a fire demon which had a purple mouth. I agreed to a bargain with the demon on condition that the demon agreed to break the spell on me.

4 comments:

Hamad said...

hi Sophie, you are such a good eldest sister. you take care of your sisters since when your mom died and you are a hard worker.

Won said...
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Won said...

Sophie, why do you think you are not fortune? Because of just you are the eldest? Don't think about that.
The fortune is depend on your mind.
It's not late! Find your fortune from now.

Chris said...

2/2: 2 paragraphs

3/3: Stays in character.

5/5: Vocabulary

Total: 10/10