Thursday, June 14, 2007

From Calcifer's View

I'm Calcifer, the fire demon. I have a long blue face with flaming green hair. Sophie grabbed up a bucket and besom and got to work. She was cleaning up and said, "The place is disgrace." I said, " It doesn't need it." She screamed because there were spiders, so she had to sweep the floor yet again. I thought I wish I'd never made that bargain with her.
Every time Howl came in, Michael and I complained loudly about Sophie. But Howl didn"t seem to attend. I had simply seized on the chance to make a bargain with her. Sophie said, "You'll have to give me a hint at least about how to break your contract." "I have given you a hint!" I said. She said, " I didn't catch it." " If I give you a hint and tell you it's a hint, it will be information, and I'm not allowed to give that." I said. Then she opened the door. There was nothing outside. I was as interested as Sophie. I didn't know what it was. Michael came in quite soon after that, and we talked about Howl. "Howl is very fickle," I said. "He is only interested until the girls falls in love with him. Then he can't be bothered with her."

3 comments:

Chris said...

2/2: At least two paragraphs long with complete sentences and attention to grammar.

3/3: Stays in character.

5/5: Use at least five of the vocabulary words. Use them correctly or it doesn't count!

Total: 10/10

Asaki, give more about Calcifer's thoughts and feelings and less quotes from the book. However, excellent use of vocabulary!

Eriko said...

Hi, Calsfer.
I think you have a very hard time in the castle because there are some people who always make trouble around you. However, I believe you can enjoy your life with them.

charmy-sachy said...

Hi Calcifer!!
Seeing your view, I found that Sophie is so selfish woman, isn't she? I think, if you treat her kindly, she will be kind and try to find the way to break the spell you under!! So, be kind to her:)